KanesakiHyudou's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fog]

well...your common problem seems to be anatomy
your coloring is okay
so are your visual effects
though try polishing your work further

and btw nice work! XD!

Oddlem responds:

I definitely gotta keep working on my anatomy, probably my weakest point (especially those hands!) Thanks so much for the critique, I'll make sure to keep focusing on that! >w<